Killgallon's+Sentence+Imitating-AG

__Activity 9 (Practice 1)__
1. __Model__: The bear dropped to all fours, whimpering -//Hal Borland,// When the Legends Die __Imitation__: The Class scattered in all directions, running. 2. __Model__: As time went on, I began to depend more and more on my left foot for everything. //-Christy Brown,// My Left Foot __Imitation__: When the winner appeared, the crowd started to shout louder and louder in the stadium. 3. __Model__: Dazed, suffering intolerable pain from throat and tongue, with the life half throttles out of him, Buck attempted to face his tormentors. -//Jack London,// The Call of the Wild __Imitation__: Refreshed, feeling tremendous relief because of his vacation, in a mood much improved, he started to swing his tennis racket. 4. __Model__: He felt a heavy, sighing peace, like a soldier who has been comfortably wounded and knows that war for him is over. -//Edmund Ware, "An Underground Episode"// __Imitation__: He spoke one slow, nervous sentence,like a friend who has often been hurt and believes that expressions now must be guarded. 5.__Model__: Six boys came over the hill half an hour early that afternoon, running hard, their heads down, their forearms working, their breath whistling. -//John Steinbeck,// The Red Pony __Imitation:__ Prom dancers spun around in the gym during the last dance that night, stomping loudly, their arms up, their bodies swaying, the band blaring.

__Activity 9 (Practice 1)__
//John// //Hersey//, Hiroshima //Ernest// //Hemingway//**, Green Hills of Africa**
 * 2. Model**: Near the spot upriver to which Mr. Tanimoto had transported the priests, there sat a large case of rice cakes which a rescue party had evidently brought for the wounded lying thereabouts but hadn't distributed.
 * Imitations:**
 * B.** At the place in the room where he had left his books, there was a stack of journals that had evidently been brought by several of the more academic students but hadn't been used by the teacher.
 * H.** Outside the shack from which the patrol had started shooting, there was a blast of gunfire that the rebels had intended for the door lock but hadn't hit.
 * 2. Model: There was also a rhino, who, from the tracks and the kicked-up mound of strawy dung, came there each night.**
 * Imitations:**
 * E.** There was also a turtle, who from the half-eaten tomato and the hole under the fence, had visited the garden that day.
 * G.** There was also the horror, which, from the odor and snake-belly sensation of dead flesh, came there each time.
 * 3. Model:** The dark silence was there and the heavy shapes, sitting, and the little blue light burning.
 * Imitations:**
 * F.** The big race was ready to being and the line of cars, waiting, and the red flag still standing.
 * C.** The dense fog was there and the bloody bodies, dying, and the torn white flag waving.
 * 4. Model:** Light Flickered on bits of ruby glass and on the sensitive capillary hairs in the nylon-brushed nostrils of the creature that quivered gently, gently, its eight legs spidered under it on rubber-padded paws.
 * Imitations:**
 * D.** I sat on velvet grass and under spreading blue leaves in the light-yellow atmosphere of a planed that orbited, slowly, stedily, its sx moons clinging close like new-born children.
 * A.** Stars twinkled on pieces of broken shells and on ruined sand castles in the sea-drenched sand of the beach that stretched miles, endless miles, its many shells strewn on it by high-crested waves.